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Alicia's avatar

The feeling of detachment and dissociation is growing rapidly. I'm on Ripp's side.

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Unfortunately Ripp isn’t the only thing in that apartment paying attention. Can't blame you for siding with him.

Alicia's avatar

I always side with the feline! I can’t wait to see where it goes next.

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

Every one of your stories is full of great lines or phrases that make your writing brilliant. In this one, really loved: “She had short gray hair and looked like she’d been born inside a quarterly review.” I mean, I work with her. Everyone does. Brilliant description.