5 Comments
User's avatar
Randy M's avatar

Don't take me pointing out other works it reminds me of as an accusation of lack of creativity or anything, but there was this one twilight zone where an author could bring anyone to life by dictating their appearance into a tape recorder, and then make them vanish by burning the tape. Same creepy vibes. Anyway, I'll be reading this one through, I think.

The Horror of Miles Carnegie's avatar

No worries on the comparisons. Serling is the patron saint of the 'everything is fine until it isn't' school of thought. It’s about to get a lot more invasive. Glad you’re sticking around.

Becky Hayward's avatar

oooooh, this is getting even better.

"Evan backed toward the door. 'Who wrote you?'

'Nobody wrote me,' Dana said."

Nour elhouda's avatar

Such a beautiful piece. Hookeedd

The Horror of Miles Carnegie's avatar

Thank you. More is coming!