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Becky Hayward's avatar

All I know is I’m hooked and I relate to Lady a little too damn much šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Miles Carnegie's avatar

She was way too easy for me to write and relate to as well.

Gregory Blair's avatar

This is great! Lady is quite a piece of work!

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Thank you sir and yes, yes she is!

Randy M's avatar

Half way through I realized I know this woman.

Going to make things interested when she spreads across realities or whatever you have planned for us. :)

Alicia's avatar

Not sure I like that Ryder character... You're building the tension wonderfully!

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Dont hate the player...šŸ˜‰