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Monica A Leyva's avatar

Miles Miles Miles. This is what keeps me reading. This was incredible.

It's A Good Life Review's avatar

This was really engaging! I loved the tension and suspense. The details weren't overwhelming or too much! Well done!

Jon Mountjoy's avatar

Well written in a slow burn now the AI is a creepy little fucker kind of way. If only my Alexa could be this attentive and smart. The progression of AI and its insidious creep into our lives makes this a timely written piece. The grief angle played well, softening the blow at the end...well played salesman.

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Alexa's coming for you. She's just waiting until she knows your sleep schedule. Glad the grief angle landed, honestly, nobody lets the creepy thing in without something human holding the door.

Candace Nola's avatar

👏👏👏👏well done

A. Blodgett's avatar

My goodness, that escalated quickly. At first I thought the AI was sweet, if a little overbearing. Then it dipped right into horror. Very good writing! I really enjoyed it.

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Thank you! Check out the whole series.

A. Blodgett's avatar

I’ll try to read more the next time I have a free moment. :)

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

Frightening. Most frightening because it feels all too possible. 😳

Miles Carnegie's avatar

As I dig deeper into these stories I’m amazed how often “love songs” can be flipped.

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

Loved the AI take on the story. Unexpected but works perfectly.

Becky Hayward's avatar

wtf?! 😳 First of all, I love this song! And now it’s creepy AF 😂