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I think I’m turning Japanese!'s avatar

Amazing story. Loved the world building and how the final part ended up back at the beginning again. Very well written.

Miles Carnegie's avatar

Yes! Glad you enjoyed it!

J. Michael Thomas's avatar

Thanks for reading! Glad you liked it!

Owen T Badenoch's avatar

Excellent, chilling fulfillment of the first half. Well done!

Alicia's avatar

Chilling.

Charles Moritz's avatar

Very well written! Sadly, this is probably the way some people will live in reality in the future.